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1-2 of 2 A brief emotional goodbye amidst the flames, July 17, 2023This is an entry in the Neo Twiny Jam, written in less than 500 words.
Rather than focusing on significant branching or mechanics, this story paints a picture of two cursed lovers perishing in the flames.
It has some mild worldbuilding and instead focuses on emotion. I felt like the overall story and vibe worked better than some of the individual phrasing. The characters seemed at a distance from each other, having slow, tender conversations while in a situation that would make speech quite difficult. But I think this author is one I'd like to read more of in the future.
- Edo, June 28, 2023
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