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About the StoryYou're with each other at the beginning and you with each other till the end. You'll let the flames consume you. Together at least. Game Details |
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Entrant - Neo-Twiny Jam
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A brief emotional goodbye amidst the flames, July 17, 2023This is an entry in the Neo Twiny Jam, written in less than 500 words.
Rather than focusing on significant branching or mechanics, this story paints a picture of two cursed lovers perishing in the flames.
It has some mild worldbuilding and instead focuses on emotion. I felt like the overall story and vibe worked better than some of the individual phrasing. The characters seemed at a distance from each other, having slow, tender conversations while in a situation that would make speech quite difficult. But I think this author is one I'd like to read more of in the future.
The fire consumes all, but love remains., June 11, 2023
Quite a sad piece about the end of things (life), and the lack of acceptance. No matter your choices, the outcome stays the same - the end does not wait for an eleven-hour miracle. But you know that already. You know everything was doomed from the start. Yet, through the tragic end, there is a promise of never-ending love, of hope, and of meeting again...
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