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An amusing linear story riffing on familiar internet tropes, December 19, 2013This is an amusing comedic work which riffs on familiar ground.
The humor is dry and understated--not laugh out loud funny, but amusing & wry.
There is only ever one choice--one real choice at least--and regardless of when you make it (or fail to make it) the story works. I can't say too much about the actual comedy or the nature of the joke, because it would spoil the experience of playing this game.
I would urge the author to format the text differently; it is hard to read, and could really use basic typographic improvements. Line height increase, size increase, and a better, more easily-read typeface would make this a much stronger piece. In general I think Twine authors should put a little more work into the presentation of their text; it is easy and generates a huge improvement with only a few minutes of even basic, default formatting.