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Go to the game's main page Member ReviewsNumber of Reviews: 1 Write a review A Few Things, May 15, 2014 by keyra There were a few things that threw me off from enjoying this, but my main concern was the use of "retarded." I understand that this could be written off as contemporary character slang, but I felt like its current usage is jarring and in rather poor taste. There would be many other words that could have the same effect without carrying the heavy negative and rather triggering connotations associated. Was this review helpful to you? Yes No Remove vote | Add a comment
Comments on this reviewPrevious | << 1 >> | Next Charry, May 15, 2014 - Reply Previous | << 1 >> | NextHey Keyra, This is the author. Thanks for the comment, I'm glad you (mostly) enjoyed it :D I'm sorry about the use of "retarded" - I wasn't actually originally intending to publish this so I didn't even think of the fact that it might be offensive to anyone. I was just thinking of the sort of vocabulary the high school kid you're playing as would use, and I was trying to make him sound in character. I also realize about how unrealistic the dragon character was. A lot of stuff in this story is somewhat unfinished and very implausible. It's the first interactive story I've written so I was just trying to get a feel for how it's done. I'm intending to continue working on this story and fleshing it out more when I have time! Anyway, thanks for the feedback. Glad you liked the concept! ^o^ |
