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About the StoryMade for Neo-Twiney Jam 2023. 499 words. Game Details |
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In 5 small acts, the narrator describe its life from its creation, the first of its kind; its education, with questions about morals; its labour, surpassed by its children until discarded when useless; its retirement, passing in a blink of an eye; to its death, remembered or maybe forgotten.
It is an odd entry about the human condition…
Fascinating but confusing story about mechanical life, July 25, 2023This game was written for the Neo Twiny Jam in 500 words or less.
It has little in the way of branching or complex mechanics and so relies entirely on its capacity for storytelling and the momentum provided by links.
The links work pretty well; a series of moral dilemmas in the middle and a nicely paced denouement at the end.
The writing is evocative, reminding me of all the old sci fi anthologies my dad had from Philip Dick and Isaac Asimov. However, the writing was very 'skirting around the edges', asking people to fill in the blanks, and I just couldn't fill them in very well. There are some clear and strongly hinted/described aspects, but I didn't see how they gelled together. (Edit: Like (Spoiler - click to show)the dramatic birth moment indicates a story of extreme drama and prowess; the moral choices just seem like a run of the mill utilitarian AI; and the finale indicates unimportance. All of these can exist in a self-contradictory story with no single interpretation, but there's a consistent negative viewpoint on the AI's interactions with humans that makes it difficult to imagine wildly different interpretations.
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