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About the StoryA 470 words story made as an entry for Neo Twiny Jam.Baron Magmawalker is a hybrid of Tyrannosaurus and tiger. His father left him before he was born. Game Details |
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A t-rex/tiger hybrid questions existence, July 17, 2023This is a brief Twine game written for the Neo Twiny Jam.
It features an illustration of a t-rex/tiger hybrid called Baron Magmawalker who questions their existence.
The very concept is, in fact, deeply cool. However, this game seems to want to go into four different directions and doesn't manage to get far in any. It's an origin story mixed with an exploration of personal depths mixed with an Aesop's fable mixed with the prologue to an epic quest. I feel like it could do with a bit more focus or a bit more time.
Baron, a half-tiger half-dinosaur who struggles with his identity and not being able to fit in either groups, decides to find his father for some answers. Even with an intriguing setting and clear themes, this piece felt either like a rushed story or a prologue where all these themes would be explored… Some passages were a tad confusing on where they were going.
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