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About the Story"Ben has been acted strangely. Not only lack of sleep, he's acted like he always been stalked every night. I'm his best friend, I need to know something. He need my help." Game Details |
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Entrant - Neo-Twiny Jam
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Very brief story about a dinosaur nightmare, July 17, 2023This game was entered in the Neo Twiny Jam, written with 500 words or less.
This is just a big text dump; two choices, both leading to a solid wall-of-text paragraph.
The story is disjointed, about a dream about a skinned dilophasaurus. This is the second game by the author I read, and I far prefer the other one. This one just doesn't have enough substance to support itself.
Your friend has been plagued by a recurring nightmare, and you are given the choice to pull the information out of him or speak to a (his?) support robot. Either choice brings more questions than answers… This felt like a good beginning to a mystery, maybe an investigative one.
It has some potential. But I did find the formatting and prose hindering my enjoyment of the story…
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