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2 of 2 people found the following review helpful:Just a story, but a beautiful story, May 12, 2018
This piece is completely linear, but the writing is excellent enough that I'm not taking any points off for that. While the story is short and simple, there is enough wealth of detail that I didn't feel the wordcount limit. The Twine links pace out the story well, with a nice effect in the ending.
A lushly written, tragic work. Well worth a read if you're a fan of mermaids or the darker side of folklore.
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