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Passages

by Jared W Cooper

Speculative
2020

(based on 10 ratings)
5 member reviews

About the Story

These are all the weekends that will have passed when you read this.

Game Details

Language: English (en)
First Publication Date: October 1, 2020
Current Version: Unknown
License: Freeware
Development System: Twine
IFID: 741B7355-77F5-40F5-B29C-45BA5F9D36F2
TUID: lkihb7elkh87dbf

Awards

80th Place - 26th Annual Interactive Fiction Competition (2020)

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2 of 2 people found the following review helpful:
Solid premise let down by sketchy characterization, December 9, 2020
by Mike Russo (Los Angeles)
Related reviews: IF Comp 2020
Despite the bad rap they sometimes get, to my mind thereís absolutely nothing wrong with a metaphor thatís too on-the-nose. Sure, the author might get an eye-roll or two at how obvious theyíre being, but most of the time thatís outweighed by the pleasure the reader gets at figuring out whatís going on, or feeling like theyíve gotten one over on the author (they havenít). If the emotion or idea that the metaphor is going for resonates, and itís grounded in specific circumstances and well-drawn characters so it doesnít just float away Ė and if it doesnít wear out its welcome Ė this can be a solid approach for a work of fiction. Iím thinking of the novel Exit West, for example, which explores immigration by having magic portals appear in the middle of a war-torn country, allowing people to leave in an instant but with no say where they wind up Ė thereís the eye-roll Ė but because the two main characters and their relationship are written with enough subtlety and detail that they feel true and specific, Exit West is good.

So, Passages then. Our narrator lives in another one of those worlds where magic portals are cropping up hither and yon, though these appear able to move one through time instead of space. Their partner, it quickly eventuates, has gone missing, either accidentally or on purpose entering one of the portals, or maybe their unhappiness summoned the portal or somehow they turned into one? Itís unclear, which is fine (whatís less fine is this awkwardness around pronouns, which is hard to write around since neither character has a name or gender assigned as far as I could tell Ė based on the relationship dynamics, I thought the narrator was male-coded and the partner female-coded, so Iím going to go with that while acknowledging itís arbitrary). We read occasional journal entries from the narrator as he dives into the portals, turning over his faults and recalling memories of happier times he searches for her in the nooks and crannies of the past (eye-roll).

This is fine so far as it goes Ė the writing isnít lyrical or anything, but itís well-considered and typo-free, and the narrator has a strong voice. And the experience Passages explores is quite universal so Iím sure it will have at least some resonance for most readers. There are two issues holding it back, though, one minor and one major. The minor issue is that Passages is barely interactive, beyond clicking to move to the next section of text There are I think two places where you can click a bit of text to change a word, but not in a way that really impacts the valence of the passage (one of them is something like ďI look for her in March/July/February/DecemberĒ). This makes it potentially an awkward fit in an interactive fiction competition, but isnít really a problem except to the extent that its presentation might lead the reader to expect a form of engagement thatís not on offer.

The bigger issue is I didnít find sufficient specificity in the characters and their relationship for them to transcend the metaphor and animate the piece with something of interest beyond the dry metaphor. The narrator is given a few details and bits of personality Ė heíd always wanted to be a carpenter, and he makes a number of nerdy references in the course of his writing Ė but itís pretty thin. And the partner is given almost no characteristics whatsoever. Partially I think this is because the narrator is idealizing her, now that heís lost her. But if anything this makes him seem even more self-regarding and navel-gazing.

And while we get the subject matter of some of the issues in the relationship, the dynamics are left frustratingly vague: at one point the narrator talks about a big fight they got into about the utility bills, and acknowledges that thatís a dumb thing to have a fight about, but thereís no remembered dialogue or other indication of the content of the fight. My brain can fill in some blanks (and hereís where gendered presuppositions are probably having an impact on my experience of the game): maybe he thought the water bill was too high because she was taking too long in the shower, and got mad about that? Thatís not very creative, but at least itís something, and seeing her do something that pisses off the narrator would help the piece land and provide fuel for his eventual catharsis.

Passages is zippy, and establishes a solid premise and character arc in the ten minutes or so to work through it, so it definitely speaks of an author to keep an eye on Ė but without a little more work done to make these characters breathe, Iím not sure how much of an impact itíll have on most readers.

2 of 2 people found the following review helpful:
Interesting idea, but falls flat, November 24, 2020
by RadioactiveCrow (Irving, TX)
Related reviews: About 15 minutes
This is ostensibly a choice-based game, but as best as I recall only had a single page that offered up so much as two links, and one of those only changed the present text a bit, rather than send you down a new path. Considering that this is supposed to be interactive fiction, I have to mark it down for having only a modicum of interactivity.

The story takes the form of a journal in a strange version of the world where wormholes sometimes open up in the basements of houses and can theoretically be fixed by plumbers. The wormholes, if unsealed, can cause issues with the flow of time, and so consequently the journal entries don't seem to follow upon each other linearly and sometimes something happening in one entry can be explained by something in a later entry. An interesting idea, but the story just didn't grab me.

It is mercifully short though, if you want to give it a quick spin.

2 of 2 people found the following review helpful:
Erased...from existence, October 18, 2020
by deathbytroggles (Minneapolis, MN)
There have been many games in the history of IF that have utilized the journal as a storytelling device, and many of those have had the player discover the journal pages out of order to add intrigue. In Passages, the entire story is reading a journal out of order, with the raison d'etre being a distortion of the space time continuum.

The time and space mechanics take a backseat here to the relationship described in the journal, primarily all of the author's regrets with regard to said relationship. It's a cool concept and I think it was structured fairly well. However, I think it would have made more of an impact if we had seen more journal entries from happier times to give the despair more weight. Mainly, I wish the protagonist wasn't such an insufferable twit; I had no emotions to spare for this person. To be fair, the PC reminds me of myself when I was fifteen, so your mileage may vary.

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