Reviews by Storysmash
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Superb writing talent, April 21, 2018Righty ho, we played it. Visually the selection of colours were lovely, no harsh contrasts. Nice narrative with heaps of talented storytelling, but lots of "clicks to continue".
I have 3 waterskins :), March 27, 2018Visually, like the background graphics and how the game looks. In the route I chose I went to meet the elders and had some interesting choices to make. At the end there was a nice note from Verity giving a little more information about the inspiration etc for the game.
"I have 3 waterskins and 4 rations of food. My wallet holds 8 gold coins"
Asher - Oozes Stlye, March 23, 2018The story description is there for all to see, but this isn't that "short" a story, and it's clear lot of effort has gone into it. One of the more standout features is the art work, it's exceptionally well done.
The amount of text isn't overpowering. Admittedly there are a few moments where it's a case of "click to continue" but there's enough in the story where you actually do want to click to continue.
Great story, March 23, 2018A lot of effort has gone into the storytelling, and even though there's a lot of it to read through, it is compelling. I got to a nice ending, there are more than one, so I was happy with that. Nice use of photos too which adds to the setting.
Some of the options presented had a nice bit of humour to them almost along the lines of "why would a sane person do that!?"
Really enjoyed this game :)
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