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About the StoryEven through six inches of reinforced steel, you can hear the noises. Game Details |
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Entrant - ShuffleComp 2014
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This reads more like a writing prompt than a story., December 30, 2014I love the survival theme, and am a sucker for end of the world stories, but this seems like an introduction.
There was no story about how the monsters came, how rampant the infestation was or wasn't, or anything. No meat to it, really. No plot.
I want to know how the character survives afterwards. Even before.
As far as introductions go, this is good, but needs to be fully fleshed out to be considered great. Keep at it, I would love to see a meatier product!
Too short, December 27, 2014Very, very short and very, very simple. I enjoyed it for the couple of minutes it lasted, but it ended before it could build up any substance, momentum, or mood.