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Rider In The Mist

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Fantasy
2015

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Nice, but needs more meat., January 1, 2015
by Chai Hai (Kansas City KS)
This by all means wasn't bad, but it wasn't extraordinary either. I understand you were trying to show different POV's of the situation, but once you did one you've done them all, really. I did find the "true" ending, but even that left something to be wanted.

It would have been better if the characters weren't so obviously linked, like maybe have a different demon's perspective, or someone from the royal family. This game didn't really give any true choices, it was either do it the right way or die.

All in all, you have a nice thing going, just try to put more substance into it.

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RoyMathur, January 2, 2015 - Reply
I'll take 'nice'.

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Roy
Chai Hai, January 2, 2015 - Reply
Yeah, it was a good game, I enjoyed it! The writing was good, I could tell a lot of heart was put into the uncle's tale. His was the most interesting, perhaps more from his perspective?
RoyMathur, January 4, 2015 - Reply
Hi

Oh dear, he's really gone for good!

However, I am writing more (non-interactive) neo sword and sorcery tales as part of an on-going serialised e-novel. A couple of them will be free.

If you're interested, just keep an eye on me via Twitter (@RoyMathur) or my blog and website RoyMathur.com

All my heroes and villains are... complicated, and if you like wizards, sane or otherwise, well this is sword and sorcery so you can expect quite a few more.

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Roy
Chai Hai, January 5, 2015 - Reply
Hello!

Complicated characters are usually the best. I'll have to remember to check your site out! I'm always looking for new tales, and I've always loved magic. :D
RoyMathur, January 22, 2015 - Reply
Please do. Thanks. };-> Roy
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