Reviews by Nathaniel
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Amusing and erotic, October 16, 2019Extremely well done erotic scenes, with a variety of light-hearted humor thrown in throughout the novel.
A bit unpolished, February 22, 2017The writing style leaves a bit to be desired, its too terse and leaves much unexplained. The pictures do help with that considerably, but I still feel like the game badly needs more descriptions. In particular, attack descriptions are badly needed.
Quite well-written and amusing, February 22, 2017It was quite well-written and amusing, with a fair bit of replayability. I was laughing through a good section of it. It is one of my favorite text games thus far.
Well-written, if rather linear, February 21, 2017It was fairly well-written, and fairly interesting. That said, I tend to prefer less linear twine games.
A bit too linear, but well-written, February 21, 2017It was a bit too linear for my tastes, more of a short story than a game, but was fairly well-written. The game could be improved by being able to respond to some of the other ads, or otherwise make decisions that actually matter.
Definitely comedic, but not an adventure, February 1, 2017It is a quite short, fairly linear, and the story was just fairly random. The final page was rather amusing, though. I personally tend to go for longer and less linear twine games.
Best part of the story:
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A bit short and linear, December 8, 2016It was a bit on the short side, and ended quite abruptly, and seemed quite linear, making it more a short story than a game. That said, the writing was decent and amusing. Seems like the decent start to a game, but could use much more content and a couple different story branches.
Fun, though evil, September 20, 2016It was overall a quite fun game, neat to see how the various civilizations evolve, and interesting strategies behind it. It took me about a half an hour to get a successful civilization, the eighteenth or so one did it. Often the civilizations will be wiped out by things beyond your control, whereas at other times you have to balance between a variety of risks.
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